# 第 6 章实际文字输出与核对

文案与翻译样例（2026-10-02）。依据随书合成事实卡生成；所含邮件仅为草稿，未外发。

## 商品页草稿

**Title**

ORG-01 3-Tier Desktop Organizer, Light Oak-Look MDF Shelves and White Steel Frame

**Bullet 1**

Three tiers for pens, small notebooks and everyday desk items.

**Bullet 2**

Assembled size: approximately 14.96 W × 7.87 D × 12.60 H in (38 × 20 × 32 cm).

**Bullet 3**

Three MDF shelf boards with a light oak-look finish, supported by a white-coated steel frame.

**Bullet 4**

Assembly required. Includes 3 shelf boards, 2 steel frame components, 12 screws and 1 instruction sheet. Wall-mounting hardware is not included.

**Bullet 5**

Wipe with a slightly damp, soft cloth, then dry. Do not soak.

**Description**

Arrange pens, small notebooks and everyday office items across the ORG-01's three tiers. The desktop organizer combines light oak-look MDF shelves with a white-coated steel frame. Its assembled dimensions are approximately 14.96 W × 7.87 D × 12.60 H inches (38 × 20 × 32 cm). Assembly is required using the included screws and instructions. For cleaning, wipe with a slightly damp, soft cloth and dry afterward. Do not soak.

## 来源及校对

| 位置 | 依据 | 核对 |
|---|---|---|
| 标题 | PF-01、PF-03 | 三层、桌面、浅橡木色MDF、白钢架，没有写实木 |
| 卖点1 | PF-01、PF-03 | 使用物品范围没有扩成重型打印机 |
| 卖点2 | PF-02 | 宽深高顺序不变；in为近似值 |
| 卖点3 | PF-01 | oak-look指外观，没有擅写oak veneer |
| 卖点4 | PF-04、PF-06 | 3、2、12、1与包装清单一致；无壁挂配件，无额外备用螺丝承诺 |
| 卖点5 | PF-05 | 微湿软布、擦干、不浸泡均保留 |
| 详情 | PF-01至PF-05 | 与以上事实一致，未加入销量、认证、保修和价格 |

尺寸换算如下。 38 / 2.54 = 14.9606299…；20 / 2.54 = 7.8740157…；32 / 2.54 = 12.5984252…；取两位小数为14.96、7.87、12.60 in。

发布前未核事项包括目标平台及类目的标题要求、长度与禁用表达、必填属性和商品实物与事实卡是否对应。此处草稿只通过给定合成材料核对，不等于真实店铺可发布稿。

## 有意设置的错误稿与修正

练习输入原句

> ORG-01 is a solid oak organizer that holds heavy printers. It measures 38 × 20 × 32 inches, needs no assembly, and includes wall anchors and a lifetime warranty.

| 原表述 | 问题 | 处理 |
|---|---|---|
| solid oak | 与PF-01的MDF冲突 | 改成带浅橡木色饰面的MDF |
| holds heavy printers | PF-03没有承重依据 | 删除，不代写承重上限 |
| 38 × 20 × 32 inches | 把cm写成in | 恢复cm并补近似英寸值 |
| needs no assembly | 与PF-04冲突 | 改为需组装 |
| includes wall anchors | 与PF-04冲突 | 改为不含墙面安装配件 |
| lifetime warranty | 输入未给售后承诺 | 删除，不猜其他保修期 |

修正后实际输出

> ORG-01 is a three-tier desktop organizer with light oak-look MDF shelves and a white-coated steel frame. It measures 38 W × 20 D × 32 H cm (approximately 14.96 × 7.87 × 12.60 in) when assembled. Assembly is required. It is intended for pens, small notebooks and everyday desk items. Wall-mounting hardware is not included.

## 中文邮件及英文翻译

输入原文见 `practice/prompts/ch06-email-translation.txt`。

Subject: Product documentation request for SKU-ORG-01

Hello,

We are preparing the product information for SKU-ORG-01. Please confirm whether you have load-test documentation for this model, and provide the usable internal dimensions of each tier and the assembly instructions.

Our current packing list shows 3 shelf boards, 2 steel frame components, 12 screws and 1 instruction sheet. Please check this list against the current packing specification. Please do not substitute specifications from another model.

If any of the requested documents are not available, please let us know.

Thank you,
[Sender]

核对结果为SKU未变，包装数量3、2、12、1未变；「是否有」保留为确认请求，没有改成已经通过测试；未加入采购量、付款、时限或发货承诺。收件人、真实发件人身份与附件仍待发送前填写。

## 两种迁移的区别

供应商询盘可以将所需资料改为报价、最小起订量和交期，但要把数量、目的地、规格写清楚；尚未确定时明确请求报价条件，不替卖家承诺下单。

达人邀约可以先问合作意愿与报价，例如「We are considering a product demonstration featuring ORG-01, a three-tier desktop organizer. Would you be open to discussing the format and your rates?」。这只是一段可复用表达，不是真实联系记录；赠样、报酬、发布时间、内容授权期限和使用地区都尚未约定。